Before spring, it’s winter

 The roads are icy

And the air is freezing

Leaves are gone

And I don’t see any squirrels on the tree

Cold wind is blowing

And the birds are moving

Its winter

The ice and snow started to melt

The air is getting warm

Blossoms are coming upon on a tree

And I see a squirrel looking for an acorn

I feel nice warm breeze

And guess what I see!

The birds are coming back

They are making new home on the tree

Spring is here!

Warm, nice spring is here!

After cold, freezing winter
- sOcCeRlOvEr11

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9 Responses to “Before spring, it’s winter”

  1. DSHR Says:
    May 2nd, 2008 at 11:58 am

    I think your poem is very down to Earth. As I was reading it, I was getting images in my head. Thank you for that image!

  2. tam Says:
    May 4th, 2008 at 8:04 pm

    I love your poem. i just don’t like the transistion of the seasons because i have allergies

  3. JLA Says:
    May 5th, 2008 at 11:42 am

    I like winter !! My birthday is in winter! That is why I love this poem.

  4. ONT Says:
    May 6th, 2008 at 7:42 pm

    I like this poem because it is true that everything blossoms. Spring is beautiful and I love it, but not as much as Summer.

  5. KMO Says:
    May 7th, 2008 at 8:27 pm

    I think this poem is great poem because It explains how Winter is. I think I would write a poem like the one you made except it would be about Summer because my birthday is in the summer.

  6. ACC Says:
    May 8th, 2008 at 6:26 am

    Winter is cold but I like it because my birthday is in the winter. Oh yeah Nice Poem.

  7. AQF Says:
    May 8th, 2008 at 11:35 am

    I LIKE THIS BECAUSE I’M A BIG FAN OF WINTER

  8. LCR Says:
    May 8th, 2008 at 11:46 am

    I like your poem, even though winter isn’t my favorite. I still enjoyed reading it!!!

  9. JKL Says:
    May 8th, 2008 at 12:02 pm

    I love the spring and the Winter !!!!!***** Sometimes the winter Is annoying and the Spring IS THE BEST

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