Double Sided Things
Things around us are double sided
Papers are one of the double sided things
Books are one of the double sided things
Erasers are one of the double sided things
Clothes are one of the double sided things
Tapes are one of the double sided things
Do you know what else is double sided?
People’s minds are
Even though they are smiling
They might be crying inside
Even though they are having fun and excited
They might be shouting and screaming for help inside of themselves
Even though they act tough and hard
They might be shivering and asking for help inside
Everything around us including you is all…
DOUBLE SIDED
- sOcCeRlOvEr11
May 1st, 2008 at 9:21 am
You did very good on this poem and the poem is very deep
I have a lot of friends that are double sided around my block
they would act cool around me but when they talk to other people
they would get angry and I would have to calm them down
anyway I like your poem a lot and I think you should keep writing more poems like this.
May 2nd, 2008 at 11:57 am
This poem reminds me of the Hannah Montana song “The Other Side Of Me”. Now every time that I hear that song I will think of your poem!
May 4th, 2008 at 8:03 pm
I like your peom a lot. I’m a double sided person well in a good way. I say that because some people are double sided in a bad way
May 5th, 2008 at 11:37 am
You are so right. Everything is double sided.
May 6th, 2008 at 7:39 pm
I really really love this poem because it speaks out to you. This poem speaks out to me because it’s saying how people can look a certain way, but feel another way. This is a true poem because a lot of people that I know are like that.
May 7th, 2008 at 8:30 pm
This reminds me of a story. I forgot what was the the name but that story was a good one. I liked this poem very nice!
May 8th, 2008 at 6:25 am
Sometimes things can be double sided in many ways. Your poem knocked my socks off.
May 8th, 2008 at 10:27 am
THIS IS GOOD BECAUSE EVEN THOUGH YOU HAVE MILLIONS OF DOLLARS YOU CAN BE HURTING
May 8th, 2008 at 11:44 am
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It’s deep
May 8th, 2008 at 11:51 am
this poem was enjoyable because it spoke out to people who have millions of dollars can feel hurting inside.
May 8th, 2008 at 11:58 am
Alot of things are double sided and sometimes its bad and other times is ok!!!!!!!******