Just you and me
Before any of this had begun
I always knew she was the one
That’d stay on my mind
Then our lives intertwined.
Her eyes shine brighter than the moon’s light,
I hold her close , leaving me without a fright
Her laugh puts a smile on my face
Setting my heart at a very fast pace
She’s always able to brighten my day.
Making gray skies fade away
Every moment I see her smile,
I pray that she will stay awhile
Late hours spent on the phone,
Our voices at a calming tone.
Ending our calls with a “Goodnight”
Wishing I was there, holding her tight.
Miss tree
SMS-H
June 11th, 2009 at 2:49 pm
Dear Miss tree,
I thought this poem, Just You and Me, was so sweet. It used good word choice and descriptive words well. “Her eyes shine brighter than the moon’s light,” was my favorite line. This was a very well-written poem.
Nightfire, SMSP, 6/11/09
June 11th, 2009 at 7:59 pm
Dear Miss Tree,
Your poem Just You and Me was a great poem. You put your feelings into it which is difficult to do and youmade your poem as a sort of reference to the real world of haw people actually feel about each other.
Bow Hunter SMSP