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05 05 2009

Remembering My Summer

Posted by: stu063 in Hour 5, tags: , ,

I lay outside.
I can still feel a breeze,
in the air.
The sun blazes heavily.
Its so bright,
I begin to squint my eyes.
But at least the summer days,
are here at last.
Now, the true beauty of summer begins to unfold.
As the sun is sinking down,
the moon begins to rise.
I will look up at that dark sky,
stare at the stars.
And remember this summer.
-Aryanna

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8 Responses to “Remembering My Summer”
  1. Denton R says:
    May 22nd, 2009 at 10:46 am - Edit

    This has really good detail and I am inferring your favorite season is summer.

  2. Savannah.S & Jenna.C says:
    May 22nd, 2009 at 11:00 am - Edit

    This is really full of details and we thought that it was so great that we both put our comments together! :D -Savannah & Jenna

  3. MADDIE & Shaunessey says:
    May 22nd, 2009 at 11:20 am - Edit

    MADDIE SAYS; I love your conclusion. =)
    Shaunessey - Your poem just fills me up with life over and over again.

  4. kiley s - sadie k says:
    May 22nd, 2009 at 1:16 pm - Edit

    i loved it and it made me cry and Sadie says she like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) hey it was a good poem

  5. Nile R. says:
    May 23rd, 2009 at 7:31 am - Edit

    Aryanna this perhaps one of the best poems I have ever read. I really like how you ended your poem and how you lead up to your conclusion so we could feel how you felt about that summer. The ending takes me to another world. Seriously. It’s that good. I agree with Shaunessey, your poem fills me up with life over and over again.

  6. Kelsey H. says:
    May 23rd, 2009 at 5:14 pm - Edit

    I am with Nile, this is one of the best poems that i have read also! I feel I can really visualize the sky and the sun. I imagine you had a pretty good summer!

  7. Katelynn F. says:
    May 26th, 2009 at 11:30 am - Edit

    Why did you chose to write about summer? I like the poem a lot but it is kinda short but it is meaning full!

  8. kiley s - kendra l says:
    May 26th, 2009 at 1:43 pm - Edit

    I really loved your poem and Kendra says it is so good :) :) :) :) :) :)