Summer Days
May 14, 2009 by jmleighton
It was the summer
Of July 4th 2007.
A bright sunny day,
The glare of the sun shining
On the calm warm water of
Donnells Pond
You could see people,
Swimming,
Water skiing,
Tubing,
Tanning,
And much more.
If you looked around
You could see camps,
And tents every where.
There was birds
Chirping, music playing.
People talking,
Boat’s running, Dog’s barking,
Wind blowing here and there.
I was happy to be camping,
To be able to get out of the house.
The days last long
The nights go fast.
-Lexi H.
5 Responses to “Summer Days”
Dear Lexi H,
I loved your poem Summe Day because,
I could see a picture in my mind and I used all my sences. I could hear the dogs barking, see the people water sking, and feel the warm sunshine. It reminded me of my canp and all my good times.
-pinkcooky105
Dear jmleighton,
Your poem, “Summer Days”, created a still picture inmy mind of your camp. I could imagine myself there seeing all of the things you described. Great Job! I loved it!
Sincerley, Shopping Bug
Dear Lexi H,
This is such a well descriptive poem! I can completely picture the summer camp ground, along with all the smells, sounds and tastes! Great sensory writing! This poem really makes me want it to be summer vacation! Welll done!
~PugBubble-SMS-Perron
I really like this pome you are a really good writer my favoret part was when you say “It was the summer of july 4,2007″ that got me really into it.you are a really good writer keep it up.
BEST OF WISHES SARA L.
Dear Lexi,
Your poem “Summer Days” was very cool, because I actually went camping on Donnell Pond. It was fun and gave me good memories of spending time there with my grandpa. It’s so cool to actually have someone else describing it. Nice work!