One Unhappy 5-Year-Old

30 04 2008

2 beds about 6 feet apart.
2 white bed sheets with red rosebushes on them.
1 small desk in between the 2 beds with the red rosebush sheets.
1 small lamp on the small desk that is in between the 2 beds with the rosebush bed sheets
2 kids jumping from rosebush sheeted bed to rosebush sheeted bed.
1 white windowsill and white blinds next to one of the rosebush sheeted beds.
One bad jump onto the white windowsill.
One black eye.
One call for mom.
One, very unhappy 5 year old.

By Dylan

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5 responses to “One Unhappy 5-Year-Old”

12 05 2008
cpmfarnum (23:47:29) :

Dylan,
This poem shows clever use of repeating details and numbers.
:) Mrs. Farnum

16 05 2008
alen (09:48:58) :

i like this poem because it is fun to read

16 05 2008
shina (13:55:13) :

i like this poem it good

22 05 2008
Blakeums St Johns 1 (12:27:34) :

Heh that must hurt badly, are you related to this five year old?
from,
BLAKEUMS!

2 06 2008
Jon/Logan2 (12:58:57) :

Hello pal nice poem. I really think it is funny. You should’ve made it 2 unhappy 5 year olds. =þ ☺

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