Six Sibs
30 04 2008Shaquanah
Is the oldest
She has that advantage.
Freddie
Is my evil twin
I’m nine minutes older
That is my advantage.
Albie
Is the “angel”
She is “never” wrong.
Caroline
Is Miss Sensitive
She has to be perfect.
Ivan
Is the monkey
Jumping of the walls.
Blair-Blair
Is Mr. Flirty Pants
He blows kisses to every girl.
Those are my Six Sibs
And I know I need them all.
By Zoe
I also have a sibling. I only have one, I cant imagine how hard it is to have 6. (from San Jose)
Zoe, I have 2 siblings, and they are all special to me, so keep on writing! “Six Sibs” was a poem that I can see in action, and it paints a picture in my mind about your siblings. Keep up the good work!
Zoe i have 4 siblings i know how hard it is to have broters and sisters. But i have all sisters that is hard. if i had 6 sisters i would go CRAZY!!! i like how you described all of your siblings. and how ivan is a monkey and blair seems to like to be Mr. Flirty Pants
good luck and keep writing these poems!!! have fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zoe,
Mrs. Farnum
This is a fun poem. It certainly gives your reader a image of the different personalities in your family.
Dear Zoe,
I love your poem! I have a twin too! We get into a lot of arguments. I know what its like to have siblings that annoy you sometimes. Fantastic!
Megan
i love your poem i really got a good picture of all your siblings good job
Your house sounds like a fun, but crazy place. It is sweet that you commented how you need them all.
Dear Zoe,
I enjoyed how you described how all of your siblings in your family seem to be better than you, especially the “angel” and Miss Sensitive, but It didn’t really seem much like a poem, sort of jumpy sounding, more like something out of a small child’s autobiography.
-PiRsquared
“Ivan
Is the monkey
Jumping of the walls.”
Funny thats kind of like my roll in my family.
From,
BLAKEUMS!