Dear Taylor,
This was a good poem. It was short but you got your point across good. You had a good description of the skunk. The only suggestion i have for you is to maybe have something about when the skunk sprays. Great job, keep it up.
Sincerely,
LAXkid
13052008
stu012 (14:39:02) :
Dear Taylor,
This is a fantastic poem! I love the way you describe the skunk. I like how you said “Warns them all to stay away.” It may be short but it is great. Keep up the good poetry!
Megan
15052008
stu002 (15:25:16) :
Dear Taylor,
It was OK. You got your point across, but it was short and just sounded like a description from a textbook.
Dear Taylor,
This was a good poem. It was short but you got your point across good. You had a good description of the skunk. The only suggestion i have for you is to maybe have something about when the skunk sprays. Great job, keep it up.
Sincerely,
LAXkid
Dear Taylor,
This is a fantastic poem! I love the way you describe the skunk. I like how you said “Warns them all to stay away.” It may be short but it is great. Keep up the good poetry!
Megan
Dear Taylor,
It was OK. You got your point across, but it was short and just sounded like a description from a textbook.
-PiRsquared