Basketball
30 04 2008Play me up
I cross you over
Then lay you up
Get scared
Play off
Hit the jumper
In your mouth
Crowd goes wild
MVP goes to
King Ray
Roy Williams
At the game
Want’s me to play for
North Carolina
Full Ride
At the King James Tournament
Made the Jr. McDonalds
All American All Star Team.
Crossing everyone over
To the hole
AND 1
By Ray
that was totally wicked
i liked your poem and i thought it was good but it might have been better if you added something else that you do with the ball maybe on defense instead of offense
Ray,
This is “wicked good,” as we say in Boston. Gino and David are two of my students who loved it too.
Ms. W. Andrews Middle School
I like this poem because it sounds good and i am a very big basketball fan so really cool poem
I like this poem because this is good and because my favorite sport is BASKETBALL:)
Dear Ray,
I loved your poem. It told alot about basketball, all of the plays and being MVP. In the poem it sounds like you are a good basketball player. You described alot about basketball and made me feel like I was in the game.
MMFC7
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Your poem is so awesome. It paints a picture in your readers mind, which is what great poets do. I love basketball, too so I completely understand your poem. It would be such an honor to play for a team like North Carolina where the greatest players went: klike Micheal JOrdan. YOUR POEM IS AWESOME. OR AS BASKETBALL PLAYERS SAY: THAT WAS A SLAM DUNK!!!!!