Saturday Morning
30 04 2008The fresh morning dew smell
Blows on a tiny breeze
Through a crack in my window
The hawks squawking and
Soaring through the baby
Blue sky
Dotted with white
Puffs of clouds.
By Gina
The fresh morning dew smell
Blows on a tiny breeze
Through a crack in my window
The hawks squawking and
Soaring through the baby
Blue sky
Dotted with white
Puffs of clouds.
By Gina
Great use of sensory details, Gina!
Mrs. Farnum
Dear Gina,
Your poem “Saturday Morning” was a picture perfect poem. You used words that painted a beautiful picture in my head that showed me a scene of a cool Saturday morning. I also enjoyed how you included your senses, such as when you said “The fresh morning dew smell” you used your smell and when you said “The hawks squawking” you used your hearing. My favorite part was when you explained the puffs of clouds. Great job!!!
Sincerely tinkerbell
Brenden St. Johns 6-1
This is very detailed. It had a picure in my head. I saw that you used senses. Your a great writer!
Gina, a lovely written poem. I enjoyed the beautiful details.
Ms. W. Andrews Middle School
Dear Gina,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. You used very good deatils, and a wide variety of good words. You also used your senses which made the picture of the Fresh Morning even more deatiled, and life like. You have a very good, and unique style of writing. Good Job!!!!!
PS- Can’t wait to read amother poem by you!!!!!!!!