I love it! I go to Montana in the winter, and this perfectly describes the feeling of snow. Cold but warm seems confusing, but perfectly makes sense! I love the sensory feelings! Claire! :0)
14052008
stu012 (14:34:40) :
Dear David,
It is really nice! I know what you mean about snow. Snow is wonderful! I loved how you really made people imagine that lovely, soft, frozen water!
14052008
stu012 (14:49:43) :
Brenden St. Johns 6-1
GREAT JOB! It was amazing.The details are awesome. It really reminds me of going to the snow.
23052008
Luke St. Johns (15:06:57) :
I enjoyed the poem very much. I like thae way you said it is cold, but warm. I used to live in the snow and I think the same thing. Check out my poem PEACE, you might like it. Thanks Luke
12062008
stu032 (15:08:51) :
Dear David,
Your poem snow is amazing! The use of sensory words and imagery made me want to scream it was so wonderful. You are a true genious. Keep writing great poems.
I love it! I go to Montana in the winter, and this perfectly describes the feeling of snow. Cold but warm seems confusing, but perfectly makes sense! I love the sensory feelings! Claire! :0)
Dear David,
It is really nice! I know what you mean about snow. Snow is wonderful! I loved how you really made people imagine that lovely, soft, frozen water!
Brenden St. Johns 6-1
GREAT JOB! It was amazing.The details are awesome. It really reminds me of going to the snow.
I enjoyed the poem very much. I like thae way you said it is cold, but warm. I used to live in the snow and I think the same thing. Check out my poem PEACE, you might like it. Thanks Luke
Dear David,
Your poem snow is amazing! The use of sensory words and imagery made me want to scream it was so wonderful. You are a true genious. Keep writing great poems.
Dman695 Scarborough Middle 2 6/12/08