Marigolds

30 04 2008

The flower of October
Brown, yellows and oranges swirl
Around like a gentle whirlpool
Leaning to the right as a luscious October breeze hits
The breeze that makes cheeks rosy
Leaves of the same color
Fall next to the marigold
leaves so dead
Marigold filled with life
The beautiful
Marigold

By Steph

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3 responses to “Marigolds”

13 05 2008
cpmfarnum (00:44:24) :

Beautiful poem with great details! :) Mrs. Farnum

14 05 2008
stu012 (13:28:45) :

This poem is described beautifully, and it makes you feel like you’re in a meadow surrounded by tons of marigolds!

14 05 2008
laurie (20:51:59) :

Steph, this describes the autumn season we experience every year so perfectly.
Ms. W. Andrews Middle School

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