Music Box
6 05 2008The music box
In my head
Won’t stop playing
It plays
For hours
And hours
And won’t turn off
Mixes of
Miley Cyrus
Jonas Brothers
High School Musical
And Hannah Montana
Play
Too many times
But I love
To listen.
By Steph
Dear, Steph
I like Your poem. It I like how you related to music because I like to listen to music as well. Isn’t Miley Cyrus the same as Hannah Montana though? You should have What your favorite band or singer is. Great job with this poem though!
Sincerely LAXkid
people can easily realte to your poem, i know i have
I love your poem! i really liked how you put miley and hannah ect… i really understand what you mean by blazing in my head not stopping ,but i like to listin to it its like me
kellie S. (sjes)
Steph,
What a wonderful poem; it reminds me of some of the songs that I hear over and over in my “music box.”
Ms. W. Andrews Middle School
Dear Steph,
I like how you tell all of the music that is stuck in your head. Music gets stuck in my head and in the middle of class I can’t just start to sing. You should put some more describtion in there like your favorite song or radio station.
MMFC7
Dear Steph,
I know exactly what you are talking about. When I get songs stuck in my head they never come out until I have listened to another artist and then that song gets stuck in my head.So in conclusion very good job steph
Love The Rev Scarborough middle school1
i love yo ur poem iis soo good!! i have like a music box in my head to i like to listen to it to. like when im in class i love to sing and its fun to listen. my email is lolixpop4@aim.com we can talk about them if you want!!!