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Riding My 4 Wheeler

It was a very
sunny day.

I went in the
garage and started the
4 wheeler.

I get on and I rode
out of the garage.

I rode as fast
as I can.

It was bumpy I turned as hard
as I could and I pushed the brake.

I pushed the gas and I was trying
to ramp but I missed.

The tire popped and I tried to
push it inside of the garage.

The next day I was caught.
I had to pay with my allowance.
It wasn’t that bad.
the next day was even better
because it was fixed.

I was happy that I wasn’t grounded.
I still could ride.

-DeShawn

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5 Responses to “Riding My 4 Wheeler”

  1. Kevin/Logan poets 2 Says:
    May 5th, 2008 at 1:04 pm

    hey nice poem! it was very good. i have a dirt bike and a quad! (4 wheeler)i crashed my quad and it was fixed just like in your poem!

  2. auston s Says:
    May 13th, 2008 at 1:32 pm

    Deshawn this is a great poem and next time you ride ur 4 wheeler i hope u hit the ramp next time.

  3. Ashley W. and Courtney W. Says:
    May 13th, 2008 at 3:04 pm

    I like your line breaks!
    It reminds me about the time I crashed on a 4 wheeler! It hurt…
    =)*smiles*(=

  4. andrew k Says:
    May 13th, 2008 at 3:23 pm

    your poem is good because it has good use of words.

  5. jenna Says:
    May 15th, 2008 at 1:07 pm

    when i ride my 4 wheeler i love the breeze through my hair.

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