Delicate

May 21st, 2009

I burst forth
In an array of color
I’m new,
I’m fresh,
I twirl my skirt in the breeze.
I laugh,
I smile,
My time is worth your while.
I’m sweet,
I’m pretty,
But be careful with me.
I break,
I’m fragile,
I’m delicate.
-Alice SMSP

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2 Responses to “Delicate”

  1. Shortykid2 on May 27, 2009 9:45 pm

    Dear Alice,
    I love your poem so much! I love the short and sweet lines. This really paints a great picture in my mind! Good job!
    Sincerely,
    Shortykid2

    SMST
    5-27-09

  2. Anonymous on June 11, 2009 11:12 am

    Dear Alice,
    Your poem, “Delicate” is awesome! It is so descriptive. You really did a great job! I loved your word choice too! Lastly, You did a grate job of giving clues. I loved it when you said, “I’m new,
    I’m fresh,
    I twirl my skirt in the breeze.”
    ~Soccer39 SMSP

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