No worm? I hope.

May 21st, 2009

Crunchy and sweet
Tasty to eat
Red or green
Cut me up
or just take a bite
All around the world I travel
from being picked off a tree
Drop me I get a bruise
I’ll fill you up
Hopefully without a worm!

Soccer1-SMSP

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2 Responses to “No worm? I hope.”

  1. luckygrl13 on May 27, 2009 4:47 pm

    Dear Soccer1,
    i really like how you are talking about one thing but you make people wonder what it could be. I really like this poem.

    -Luckygrl13

  2. Anonymous on June 10, 2009 8:29 pm

    Dear Soccer1,
    I thought your poem, “No worm? I hope” was well written and was very fun to guess what you were talking about while reading your poem. Your poem had great sentence fluency and also wonderful word choice. I especially liked this part,
    “Drop me I get a bruise
    I’ll fill you up
    Hopefully without a worm!”
    Good job and I hope to hear more from you.
    From,
    gymnast11-SMSP

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