Logankid2k7(logan middle school on
May 27, 2009 9:32 am
Dear Tom
I liked your poem. its fun to guess about wat it is. are you talking about a chocolate chip cookie
Caprisun on
May 27, 2009 10:24 am
Dear Tom,
I’m pretty sure those are cookies, and they seem delicious! I llove your good description too. Keep up the good work!
-Caprisun
SMS-T
May 27, 2009
Anonymous on
May 28, 2009 7:39 am
Dear TOM,
Nice riddle poem! I loved the way you used descriptive words to convey the mystery object you chose. Keep up the descriptive writing!
OMGPONIEZ SMSP
Cam Da Man on
May 28, 2009 7:51 am
Dear Tom I love you poem because it makes me feel hungry and want to eat something. It also has a great rhythm to it
Sincerely Cam Da Man
Bippty pop 4ever on
May 28, 2009 7:59 am
Dear Tom,
I really liked your poem it was short and sweet. It kinda of made sense but you should let it make sense. I think it was a wonderful poem I like the part “I am delicious snack.”
bippty pop 4ever
smst
5/28/09
Guineveve on
June 4, 2009 7:52 pm
Dear Tom,
I really enjoyed your poem “YUM!” I thought it was great how you chose to use something that people know about for this poem. I could read it and even though you never said it was a cookie i can tell it is, beacuse of how you described it. Your line, “my circular shape” was probably the first line that gave it away to me as to what you were talking about. Nice job!
-Guineveve-sms-perron
R6b56100 on
June 11, 2009 11:02 am
Dear Tom,
I really enjoyerd reading your poem “YUM!” it really gave me a picture in my mind, and you desribe cookeis very well, and in a sly way so people could guess it. I like how you repeat “I am a delcious snack” Over all great poem….. Keep Writing
-R6b56100
Dear Tom
I liked your poem. its fun to guess about wat it is. are you talking about a chocolate chip cookie
Dear Tom,
I’m pretty sure those are cookies, and they seem delicious! I llove your good description too. Keep up the good work!
-Caprisun
SMS-T
May 27, 2009
Dear TOM,
Nice riddle poem! I loved the way you used descriptive words to convey the mystery object you chose. Keep up the descriptive writing!
OMGPONIEZ SMSP
Dear Tom I love you poem because it makes me feel hungry and want to eat something. It also has a great rhythm to it
Sincerely Cam Da Man
Dear Tom,
I really liked your poem it was short and sweet. It kinda of made sense but you should let it make sense. I think it was a wonderful poem I like the part “I am delicious snack.”
bippty pop 4ever
smst
5/28/09
Dear Tom,
I really enjoyed your poem “YUM!” I thought it was great how you chose to use something that people know about for this poem. I could read it and even though you never said it was a cookie i can tell it is, beacuse of how you described it. Your line, “my circular shape” was probably the first line that gave it away to me as to what you were talking about. Nice job!
-Guineveve-sms-perron
Dear Tom,
I really enjoyerd reading your poem “YUM!” it really gave me a picture in my mind, and you desribe cookeis very well, and in a sly way so people could guess it. I like how you repeat “I am a delcious snack” Over all great poem….. Keep Writing
-R6b56100