Your Best Freind

May 22nd, 2009  Tagged

You know me
I know you better
I’m your guide in the dark
I enjoy playing in the park
I help you find your way
and you feed me everyday

dididiipro- SMSP

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4 Responses to “Your Best Freind”

  1. stu062 on May 26, 2009 11:35 am

    i like this poem because it tells what best friends do

    elvisa

  2. Caprisun on May 27, 2009 10:23 am

    Dear Dididiipro,
    Your poem is great. It sounds like its your mom, but I could be wrong. It reminds me of my best friend and I, on the first two lines. Maybe make it longer next time, with more detail though.

    Sincerely,
    Caprisun
    SMS-T
    May 27, 2009

  3. stu060 on May 28, 2009 7:43 am

    Dear, dididiipro
    I admired your poem a lot. It reminded me of playing hiding go seek in the dark. Your poem also makes me think of my best friend. I liked that it rhymed, and I like your rhyme scheme. I also like the word choice you used. I enjoyed your poem.
    -Rhymetime28

  4. Food Lover 187 on May 28, 2009 8:06 am

    Dear dididiipro,
    This poem is wonderful! I love it. It has good description and good clues to the subject. I like where you said, ” I’m your guide in the dark.” Great job :)

    - Food Lover 187

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