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Who am I?
May 26th, 2009
I AM ____________
You stand on me every day.
I am from many, but now I am one.
You see me everyday, but probably don’t notice me
I am every color you can imagine
I am as colorless as nothingness
I am soft
I am hard
I am a welcome home for your feet
You are standing on me right now
I am a _______
By OMGPONIEZ SMSP
Filed under Riddles |5 Responses to “Who am I?”
I like how the reader has to find out what you are talking about. It is like a mystery.
Blue Star
SMS-Mrs.T
5-27-09
Dear OMGPONIEZ,
Your poem was great. I liked how you have too find out that the object was, it was interesting. I also liked the line, “I am a welcome home for your feet” it is great! There is just one thing. Your poem doesn’t have a steady rhythm. Besides that your poem was very good. Good job.
- chocolatebunny345
I love how you question who you are. I also like how you say ” I am A ______” I like how you used the blank line.
hazel02
sms-t
5/29/09
Dear OMGPONIEZ,
I am going to take a wild guess and say that you are talking about the ground!?! I think it was neat that you chose to do a poem that was a mystery. I think it may have been cool if you rhymed a little, but that might have been very chalenging. You gave descriptive clues without giving too much away. Great job with that. I also really like that you never tell your readers what exactly you are. It’s left up to our imagination. I really like this!
From, Amanda L.
Dear OMGPONIEZ,
I liked how the reader has to find out what you are talking about, it is very interesting.
Sincerely,
Kelcey E.