Darkness

Posted on June 1, 2009 by djteach95.
Categories: Definition Poems, Free Verse, Hannah's Voice.

What is darkness?

At night it lurks,

completely swallowing the light.

Can be fun,

can be scary.

Horror of nightmares,

color of black.

Pain of no acceptance.

What is darkness?

Darkness is my mood!

By Hannah

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djteach95
Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Hannah,
I thought your poem was awesome. You expressed your feelings and I thought that was great
Keep writing.

Savannah
Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Hannah,

I liked your poem because DARKNESS is my
mood too!!!!

Mrs. Myers
Comment on June 1st, 2009.

What a moving poem! The lurking, swallowing darkness- what an image!
Keep writing, Hannah!

Mrs. Kean
Comment on June 2nd, 2009.

Bad moods are good for poems. I hope your mood gets better now that it’s almost summer. Good moods make good poems too.

Kelsey
Comment on June 2nd, 2009.

Hannah,
I like your poem beecause my mood is darkness too,well most of the time anyway!
Great wording!
-Kelsey Waterfront Elementary School

cristalys
Comment on June 3rd, 2009.

Hannah,
I enjoyed your poem.
I like the words that you put in like
the word lurks.
YOU’RE A GREAT POET!!!!!!!!!!!!

andy
Comment on June 5th, 2009.

Hannah, I really like your poem!
I like the part when you said the horror of nightmare.
Keep on writing!
Good job.

Unique
Comment on June 9th, 2009.

Hannah, I really, really like your poem. It’s like the BEST poem I’ve ever read. I would know how you feel because sometimes I feel that way, most of the time when someone is picking on me. Your friend, Unique Waterfront #95.

Kim
Comment on July 9th, 2009.

Hannah, I think this is a fantastic poem, it’s so descriptive and unique. Keep up the awesome work, you’ll have to come over soon and read me more of them.