I Miss You

Posted on June 1, 2009 by djteach95.
Categories: Free Verse, Nicole's Voice.

When you left, I had to cry.

Why did you say goodbye?

You always told me,

you would not leave.

Then what was that supposed to be?

Was leaving your last option?

Or did you just choose?

Why was it you, I had to lose.

Now the memories are all I have.

Goodbye.

By:Nicole

Miss Crapo

Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Nicole, this is a great poem. It brought tears to my eyes because it touched me from experiences similar to my own life. Great job!

Mrs. Kean

Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Really nice poem!

Mrs. Myers

Comment on June 1st, 2009.

I think a lot of people can relate to your poem, Nicole. I know I have had some similar feelings at times. Keep writing!!

Kelsey

Comment on June 2nd, 2009.

Nicole,
Nice job on your poem!
Its great wording and sadness makes it a better poem!
Nice work and keep writing!
-Kelsey Waterfront Elementary School

austin

Comment on June 2nd, 2009.

Great poem!

Kelty F.

Comment on June 4th, 2009.

this is a very good poem good job!! it has good details and it makes you feel like you were there.

from,
kelty f.