Racing

Posted on June 1, 2009 by djteach95.
Categories: Acrostic Poems, Jeremy's Voice.

Roaring engines at the start line

Agressive drivers trying to pass you

Cutting through your competitors trying to be first

Imcompetent drivers are in the back trying to catch up

N2O gives you a boost to catch up to your rival

Getting to your pit stop to get gas and change all four tires

By Jeremy

ashli
Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Dear Jeremy,
Once again,you wrote an awesome poem!
I love poems that have to with racing!!
Great work!
Ashli-Waterfront

Mrs. Myers
Comment on June 1st, 2009.

Sounds like you’re a real race fan. So am I. I could really relate to your poem.

Kelsey
Comment on June 9th, 2009.

Jeremy,
Nice job on your poem it’s cool!
Plus it’s about cars!
Your poem is so descriptive and organized!
Awesome job!
-Kelsey,Waterfront Elementary School

Ija
Comment on June 17th, 2009.

Great Job. I loved how you added N20. You must be really into cars.Keep writing great poetry and add a lot of extra stuff like you added N20.Hope you write more.