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spirit bear

Terrified
Cole waited,
had the bear returned
to kill him?

As he waited the storm worsened

wind picking up
gusting harder
rain fell

ATSSS

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One Response to “spirit bear”

  1. Anonymous Says:
    June 2nd, 2008 at 9:25 pm

    Dear ATSSS,

    I enjoyed this poem because it’s short and to the point. I like how it starts off quickly describing the situation. Then comes in with a quick cliff hanger leaving the reader thinking of multiple outcomes. I like the lines “Wind picking up gusting harder rain fell.” This gives the reader more of an idea of what is going on. Keep up the good work!
    -REDSOXDUDE

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