Flower by Troy

April 23rd, 2008 | Mrs. Stice's Class |

My Mom is the flower

Pretty and bright

My brothers and I are the leaves

Offspring from my parents.

My Dad is the seed

Helps the family grow, and grow, and grows.

#1 Destiny, Waterfront on 05.06.08 at 9:41 am: I really liked your poem. It was cool. It reminded me about my mom and how she also reminds me of a flower because of the way she stands out so brightly.I love her so much.Thank you so much!
#2 Lakota on 05.06.08 at 12:03 pm: It was great! The way you said she was pretty and bright was very good.
#3 Anonymous on 05.07.08 at 2:01 pm: wow
#4 Anonymous on 05.07.08 at 2:03 pm: a flower?
#5 casey on 05.07.08 at 2:09 pm: nice poem troy
#6 kym on 05.13.08 at 12:18 pm: this reminds me of my family

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