Magic Kingdom Terror by Nik

Sun shining

Birds singing

It was a picture perfect day for the wide eyed boy

He was blissful until it happened…

They were seeing the sights at Magic Kingdom

The best child park in Disney World

He was doggedly asking to go on Buzz Lightyear of Star Command

Finally they let in

Hand in hand the family ambled to the ride

The little boy felt immortal

Like nothing could go wrong

He could smell cotton candy in the air as he dreamt a dream of a bed of candy

STOP

The boy stood dead in his tracks

Terrified of what he just saw

He glared at it and it glared at him

The gay, chubby-cheeked clown stuffed animal

Petrified, the four year old boy began to cry

All fun was gone

To this day

The boy gets scared

Whenever he sees…

A CLOWN

5 comments ↓

#1 Anonymous on 04.24.08 at 5:00 pm

awesome poem! clowns do creep me out, too

#2 stu016 on 05.06.08 at 12:05 pm

Nathan from curlew

Your magic kingdom terror started out weird but got better as it went and at the end I thought that it was weird terror

#3 Smiller on 05.07.08 at 2:05 pm

HAHA your afraid of clowns! ME TOO:)

#4 Anonymous on 05.07.08 at 2:19 pm

this is a good poem honey i understand how you feel i feel like i can relate because i had a clown problem and they used to make me feel…….sad much like your poem suggests …..good writing

#5 Anonymous on 05.07.08 at 2:20 pm

Through this poem, I can actually feel how scared you really are of clowns. Maybe your story can also stand for a few different things that scare you in life. Channeling you feelings about certain life experiences can help you get your thoughts out and have people understand what you are going through.

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