Green Acres Poetry

5 Responses to “ The Poem Cavalry ”

1. # 1 ian s. Says:
   May 27th, 2009 at 3:58 pm

   i love your strong feelings in the poem! excellent combination of words and enthusiasm! very good. try making it a little less strong!

2. # 2 Mary C. Says:
   May 28th, 2009 at 9:20 pm

   I think that this poem was meant to be a happy, cheer type poem. But I was sort of confused at the actual topic and theme of the poem… But good job anyways! =D

3. # 3 Bar Says:
   May 28th, 2009 at 11:07 pm

   I absolutely loved this poem. I can just imagine a harold announcing this aloud. It is just filled with a sound of a parade between the words.
   Peterson School

4. # 4 Gabrielle Says:
   June 9th, 2009 at 10:23 am

   So catchy! I absolutely love it! Way to think outside the box! Very imaginative! :) :)

   Maybe you could try making the ending a little more catchy to fit more with the poem. :)

   Once again, LOVE IT!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5. # 5 kayana Says:
   June 9th, 2009 at 10:42 am

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